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• Alfred A History

  (#) Cateagle 2010-07-30

  And so Harry Potter is totally subsumed into Alfread Pennyworth. I daresay he may have cause to question his decision in the future when driven to distraction by the circumstances he finds himself in. In any case, it's good to see his friends are getting out of wizarding Britain and that he is, too. It'll be fascinating if/when Lucius tries to find him and can find no trace of him. Of course, a non-magical generation later, life could get interesting should Bruce Wayne and Alfred choose to visit Britain.

• Alfred A History

  (#) thomaswatts 2010-07-31

  As Cateagle says, this story is overly ripe for a sequel. There could be opertunities for mini stories about Alfred on vacation visiting his old friends, or a generation later when Alfred returns along with Batman.
  Great story, only one problem I have with it, Harry would never truely disappear, he would have left one or two (Ron and Hermione) know what he would be doing.

• Alfred A History

  (#) David3560 2010-07-31

  Ok I just finshed reading this story but I have to say I do not see harry just walking away not with a Dark Lord around and not when the gobblins stoled all his money thinks to that blank Molfolyed is that how you spell it? No I just dont see it. Plus Harry alwas wanted a family so whos he going to marry My vote is Hermione because I just love that pairing but Luna is also up in the top of harrys possable wifes also. Ok I agree with thomaswatts this story is ripe for a sequel.

• Alfred A History

  (#) De_Siathuan 2010-08-16

  Brilliant story. A few holes in it, such as "why didn't Harry mail his friends himself" and "why didn't he try to keep up his magic", but overall, not bad. I agree with the previous reviews though, that he'd want some form of friends or family - on the other hand, spin up the abuse angle, and he'll be unable to relate romantically to other people. Giraffe and Walruss doesn't make for a good example...
  Would be nice to see a sequel.

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