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Serpent Souls, Merged as One
(#) dennisud 2010-07-31
Nice to see this one again, and with some good OC's as well. Now that the Third Bonded has been thrown out there will we see that bond attract her by the next chapter!
;-)
Good story!Author's response
it'll draw her to them. Or more accurately, it'll draw them to her...Serpent Souls, Merged as One
(#) SpringRaine 2010-07-31
I hope either Susan or Luna is the third bonded.Author's response
Sorry to disappoint you.Serpent Souls, Merged as One
(#) jabarber69 2010-07-31
hey nice one...but didnt they just eat breakfast so why did they pass out???? also I get it now, the third in the trio bond is hermione, cool...! and oh yeah, trash that game and those cartridges till you finish this and your other stories....Serpent Souls, Merged as One
(#) Cateagle 2010-07-31
A most interesting time and I suspect that the testing and evaluating their bond contributed to their falling asleep, though I wonder if Daphne isn't supplying some extra energy to help Harry's body deal with the condition it finds itself in. I suspect Hermione of being the third part of the bond and I reckon selling that to her parents may be something of a challenge. I do like Daphne's parents and their friends and it should be interesting to see what having solid support behind him will do for him.
I quite reckon that Albus is going to find himself thoroughly stymied if he tries to put Harry back with the Dursleys. I could see the wards not going back up, no matter how he tried, thanks to the Bond with Daphne and the third party interfering and insisting Harry go with them. It should be a practice in patience and adapting to reality for the Manuplative Old Bearded-one (other terms starting with "B" may be used to season to taste).Serpent Souls, Merged as One
(#) anakhuskerfan 2010-07-31
Good story, the third member of the bond is quite the twist.Serpent Souls, Merged as One
(#) ROBERT_1958 2010-08-02
Harry Harry was pulled to Daphne, why is the pull to Hermione weeker?Author's response
it's not weaker. you'll see in the next chapter.Serpent Souls, Merged as One
(#) Vanir 2010-08-03
Very, very interesting. I'm looking forward to the next installment, and it is my belief that the third can only be the infamous know-it-all. Hmm. That does seem to be the general consensus, i see. Have fun and update when you can but to quote my fav game diversion:" My muse is a fickle bitch, with a very short attention span!" Isn't it so?
Thanks
VanirAuthor's response
oh yes, most definitely true.
my Muse can truly be a total bitch sometimes.
speaking of which, where and what are you stuck on Midnight Sun? maybe I could help.
it's a shame such a great fic came to such a screeching halt.Serpent Souls, Merged as One
(#) austrian_shadow 2010-08-06
Aloah,
I realy do love soul bond fic's and am happy with the start yours took.
I'm also curious who the 3rd part will be and must admit, that I also would have liked Luna to be the one, but I' quite sure that it will do nothing to diminish this story.
KR
Shadow
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