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A repost of my old story from my other account.So what if the Way brothers were your relatives? Family reunion time!

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: - Published: 2010-08-11 - Updated: 2010-08-11 - 1704 words

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We're Not Having Fun

(#) shortygirl 2010-08-11

Gerard not a good start....
update soon
We're Not Having Fun

(#) DeathCookie 2010-08-11

Yey! Post all the other chapters, too!
We're Not Having Fun

(#) disasters1 2010-08-11

I think a way you could make this story even stronger would be to remove the - - things that mark when a period of time has changed. You have a strong enough sense of what you want to tell that you could write without these "- next day-" or "-later-" and your readers would follow. P.S I think we all our on your team, family reunions blow.