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12 reviewsin which Harry nears the end of adolescence and starts becoming… something else. Harry leaves the castle for something of an adventure while attempting to consciously avoid foolish things and fa...
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Harry Potter and the Sun Source
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2010-08-20
Great update! Unfortunately, I spent much of the first half imagining what pouring half a saltshaker into my mouth would taste like, but I expect that's my own fault.
I can't help but wish there was one more scene at the end, but it was a pretty good place to stop.
Looking forward to more.Harry Potter and the Sun Source
(#) Cateagle 2010-08-20
Heh, an excellent stopping place with all sorts of trouble obviously waiting in the wings for Draco. I thought the first bit was excellent and I rather enjoyed his stupid act (I rather imagine it was quite amusing to listen to the "talking heads" try and explain that he couldn't do what it was quite evident that he'd just done). Draco obviously has an overly inflated opinion of himself, I rather expect that Harry's response at the end of this chapter is about to defate that opinion, and quite possibly Draco.
Definitely a fun story to read, especially if one enjoys the original source of the inspiration.Harry Potter and the Sun Source
(#) Elfwyn 2010-08-20
Fantastic chapter, such excitement and enlightenment! lol! One couldn't almost feel sorry for Draco.Harry Potter and the Sun Source
(#) jabarber69 2010-08-20
hey well worth the wait....but what is the salt thing?
hope it doesnt take another 8 or 9 months for another update....but then again you do have a lot of other stories going now dont you.Harry Potter and the Sun Source
(#) DrT 2010-08-21
Draco, Draco, Draco. . . . Well, I am sure Harry will find something fun to do with (or to) him. I hope the other Muggle-born weren't hurt because Harry was distracted by his inner-questioning!
A fun read, as alwaysHarry Potter and the Sun Source
(#) hjpngmw 2010-08-21
An update! Yeah! I love what you have Fleur doing to Voldemort! And I can hardly wait to see what you have Harry do to save the non-fanatically pure-bloods, half-bloods, and muggle-borns while still defeating the bigots!
Are you going to have Harry interact with Sirius and Remus? And is Tonks going to make another appearance?Harry Potter and the Sun Source
(#) zicou 2010-08-21
Wow....
That's an awesome story!!!
I can't wait to read more so...
Continuuuuuuuuuuuue,
Z.Harry Potter and the Sun Source
(#) keichan2 2010-08-22
I loved the text on his t-shirt :-D
Ew... What Voldy is doing to try and break Fleur's mind is kind of... Ew! (and sick!) But I'm happy for Fleur that her magic healed her!
And I think that, should Fleur continue her little act with the Death-Eaters, there may soon be a lot less of them! (Oh... I wrote that immediately after the fact, and didn't see just lines after that, that Fleur already knew that... Well... It may be that I think like you ;-p)
Ooh! I can only imagine what the scene will be, when the lights will be on again! I have the feeling that the reactions will be fun!
And I'll have to re-read this story, because I realised that I forgot some details... Bah! At least, it IS a good story and I have each time I read it!
I hope to read more soon!
Harry Potter and the Sun Source
(#) axelrajr 2010-08-23
an absolute blast to read. it may have been a while since you updated, but it was worth it.
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