FicWad

[*I dOn't know if I'm going to carry this story on. I don't have time to read it through so I can't remember whats going on and blehhh! I have written down all the charecters and what they look like but can someone give me a brief, helpful review over this story so far? I don't know whats going on. I know its bad because I wrote it in all, but if you want me to carry on, I need help! XD Thank you!!