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Caresss1: Getaway
3 reviewsLive Journal Caresses instead of kisses featuring Sesshomaru & an older Rin. In this series I'm going to try & write one fic instead of a series of them. Each new chapter will be a caress. Rated R ...
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30 Caresses
(#) Ithilwen 2006-04-09
This sets the tone of your story rather well, but it doesn't do much to introduce the conflict or convince the reader to keep going.
It is nice to think of this reserved, solid Sesshoumaru as the same person as the youth of Moonlight, though.30 Caresses
(#) darkener14 2006-05-08
It's nice and all, but Rin is from the same time as Sesshoumaru, so wouldn't he know what it means in some retrospect? Unless you are characterizing him as out of the loop of new speech, since he is older by about a thousand years.
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