- Ah! So the H/Hr and the hints of H/Hr/L (which I know you so love, Doc) begin.
I loved the Death Eater debriefing. Your view of Voldemort here is both more human and more inhuman than most other authors'. He does not come across as a stereotype but it is still clear that this is an evil mastermind who has traded his humanity for power.
Ron and Ginny were well written too. People forget that Ginny grew up between GoF and OotP and became a far more rounded person in terms of her attitude and temper.
I've read this story over at Fictionalley.org and it remains my favorite amongst your works. I hope you update regularly.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10
Author's responseAs I'm sure you've noted by now, the whole story is here.
- noylj: Hermione is a target at least as large as Harry by being both a Muggleborn witch and his friend - Hermione dating Harry is irrelevant from that end. Also, these same Grangers just kicked DE butt (out of all the attacks Riddle tried, a grand total of one was successful). Even more telling, with Harry there, the Grangers' defenses are actually stronger, not weaker.
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