(#) starboy454 2011-01-09excellent story i look for word to you finshing your other story lines like x-mas after 4th year
Author's responseSummer after 4th year and Christmas 5th year are in re-write. They were originally planed to flow together then to a third story. that's what my big project is now. Combined those two are just under 44,000 words and the sequel is over 100,000 words and still growing. Don't know if I'll ever finish it but it won't be posted until it is.
(#) Uncle_Buck 2011-01-10I am happy to see some more of your work. I hope to see more or perhaps a future for some old ones.
Author's responseI'd love to have the muse strike on a few of the older stories but I wrote myself in to boxes I didn't like... If a way out appears I'll continue them.
That's why I am not posting anything else until it is complete. my latest is up to 150,000+ words and no where near complete. Harry quits was my side project. I don't know if the big one will ever be finished.
- An interesting read. I enjoyed the way you had Harry up and leave without any grand showdowns or anything, very much unlike the majority of this type of story. One thing though: You need to decide whether they're the Robertsons or the Robinsons. You actually manage to use both names in one sentence at least once.
- Just stopped back to give you a quick note here. There's a similar story called Harry Joins The RAF by Ravengrad on ff.net. Haven't read the whole thing but it starts similar to what you've got posted here. Don't know whose came first and it's not my business to say.
(#) Ravenna_Dark_Elf 2020-04-23Excellent writing...
But I can't handle Harry and Hermione leaving magic behind! It's just not right. It doesn't feel right to me. They way JKR ended her series was perfect to me, though I definitely wanted more... Which I eventually got in the Cursed Child but... That thing does not count as a proper Harry Potter book. Yick.
Anyways, good story but I don't like them leaving the magical world. It makes me sad. So sorry, hope I didn't offend you!
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