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Chapter Six
4 reviewsThe girls get their sexy breakfast story... But maybe they aren't the only ones who tell S.B stories?
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YOU! be in the story!
(#) elsa1794 2011-01-25
Sounds hot! Hope you could give us some more detail tho.. pervert mode: ON LOL
Update soon please! :DAuthor's response
Haha I tried to but it felt so weird writing a sex scene for another person... Like.. I can write them easily for my characters. But you, Liz, Leesh and Harley are real people y'know... So it's kinda awkward.. And all though I'll admit I'm a little perverted.. No one tops you kid :PYOU! be in the story!
(#) harleyanne 2011-05-03
RIGHT.
I have been searching for this story for months since the auditions, trying to keep up with when it was gonna get started. I drew a blank for ages so I gave up hope. I'd figured it would come in a separate post so I didn't subscribe, and then I like I said I stopped searching. Until today I remembered about it and thought how cool the idea sounded and I had a real craving to read it, so I did some more searching, just to see if you had any more information up about it (I hope you know that took me an extremely long time), and I found this! I had no idea you'd even started it and now there's six chapters?! Holy shit dude. I can't tell you how excited I was/am.
On a similar note, that's why I haven't reviewed yet - I had no idea you'd even started writing this yet, so I'm sorry if it seemed like I didn't give a shit/support you/like this. I'll remedy that now.
Straight off, this is fucking awesome. I love the idea, you execute it brilliantly, the banter's really funny, I'm loving the plot so far... I'm just really into this story. I think you're doing a great job on it, it was well worth all that detective work I did to find it and I am definitely subscribing so I don't miss the rest!
Hmm, regarding what you said about getting the characters right, you've done a pretty good job so far, but I'll help you out a bit if you want - I know the information you have isn't all that much. Uh, I'm very sarcastic, I always smirk instead of giggle, I rarely get super-excited or hysterical, I'm usually one-of-the-guys, I always talk about books, music, comics and psychology, and I always prefer villains to heroes. I swear a lot (sorry), am quite happy spending time on my own even though I love my friends, drink way too much coffee, read a lot of the time and am quite introspective about personal things - I don't like to make people aware of my problems. As far as the relationshipy bit goes, I'm pretty laidback and cool and not giggly, flirty or girly, I like to chat to guys about things I'm interested in that we have in common and just hang out, not do like dates or anything, I don't get embarrassed easily, I don't flirt or flutter my eyelashes but I will be the one to make innuendo and raise the temperature, I'm not overly emotional and that's when I get awkward - when I really care about someone and have to admit that to them. I don't like being vulnerable.
...Well that was like therapy. I hope it helps with your character!
Anyway, I am so loving this story, I think you're really brilliant, I hope you're feeling better now after your accident, and I'm so sorry for only just finding this!
xo HarlAuthor's response
Harley.
You are a breath of fresh air. You are going to be a major pain in the butt to write though :P but don't worry I love you a lot so I will try my hardest to do you justice. So I'm thinking of the next sex scene I write to be you and Mikey... How do you feel about this? Also what would be the best way to go about this?
I'm so sorry it took you forever and a day to find this story, but I'm glad you subscribed! :)
xo CalYOU! be in the story!
(#) harleyanne 2011-05-04
Awh, thank you. I'm still really sorry for disappearing for ages - you must have thought I was horrible!
Ahh, I'm sorry about that! I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter for sure! I'm genuinely really excited about it :)
Hmm, interesting. I wouldn't complain ;) Uh, I'm not really sure what to say would be best... I guess from an outside point of view (which feels really weird), it would be more of a gradual thing. Like, an immediate attraction, but not an immediate hook-up... if you know what I mean. I d'know, this feels really weird to try and look at myself objectively and next to Mikey, but I think that's kinda how it would go down. I'm quite comfortable with people and I find it cute how Mikey's pretty awkward and nervous, but personally I imagine that he would be different once they were alone. ...I think that would be a good dynamic. I'll leave it to you though :) Do contact me again if I'm a pain in the ass :P
I'm glad too! Like I said, I'm seriously excited for the next chapter, and it's really nice to properly talk to you at last!
xo HarlAuthor's response
Hmmm... Alright I think I have an idea... Maybe.. I might do some character development between the two of you and make Elsa and Gee hook up first. Elsa's a little perv, so I'm sure she would have no problem with that.
I'll be sure to give you a shout out it you continue to be a pain :P
I'm glad to finally get to have a chat too!
xo CalYOU! be in the story!
(#) harleyanne 2011-07-05
Cal! Dude! I've been checking up forever for an update to this - what's happening? Everything okay?
xo Harl
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