- I had the feeling that hermione would get some sort of 'offer' and I do so like the Demetors getting what they give so much!
Can't wait to see how Tom handles harry especially if he does something foolhardy like say taking Luna Lovegood as bait, or even worse using Hermione!
Still you take your stories though a roller coaster for us readers to ride so Lets get to that las death defying drop and see tom get his!
- "the silly woman who jumped from a perfectly good aircraft with a bed sheet strapped to her back" Thanks for this one :-D
"Ridiculous, he is at least two years of training away from doing impossible thing" Bwahahahahahaha! Thanks again!
"It seems that my son has started doing impossible things ahead of schedule." Excellent! :-D
"And for free," Bwahahahahaha! Dear God! I LOVE Chiun's character!
"and everything was alright again."... I'm not sure how Hermione would have reacted, had she been able to understand this conversation... But I'm certain she would have had a reaction ;-p
"You have to make allowances for the elderly, as they are easily confused." Bwahahahahahahaha! You really got me with this one :-D
"I am willing to go to one hundred fifty thousand." I half expected Hermione to react strongly, but I guess she was too stunned! (And I wonder if she will accept...)
"Odoriferous Crotchsniff from Minister Fudge's Reelection Campaign." What a name :-D
I can't believe that Harry went back to the family after having killed the father!
I hope to read more soon!
(#) DragonWing 2011-02-12Really nice. But the Horcruxes still remain an issue. Harry and Chiun are now on the move, but if they don't take those things into account, well they'll be stuck on the contract longer than expected.
HAHAHAHA!! Chiun is a riot. Can't wait to see how Pansy or Milicent react to the offer, or any other Outsider. Anywho, everyone who is quitting Hogwarts can have a perfectly capable magic school near Sinanju's school.
- Hmm, I wonder if Hermione, after she considers matters, will settle down to a solid round of bargaining with Chiun over the exact specifications and requirements of her contract both duties and rewards (I can see being interested in a somewhat longer term than just one child, especially if she can be trained where Harry was trained). I do love Harry's approach for dealing with dementors (it's fun to see them scared for a change). I rather like the way Fleur is still fighting Tom with a fair degree of success and I'm sure that's not helping Tom's mood at all. The interogation of Rowle was nicely handled and I suspect he got off light.
Regarding horcruxes, do they even exist in this fic other than the diary? I know something was removed from young Harry but it was never stated exactly what and it could be just a portion of Tom's but not one serving as an anchor.
I"m looking forward to seeing how this wraps up. I do rather hope he can rescue Fleur from Tom's control ('twould be a most fitting end to Tom) and 'twould be amusing to see how her "reward" goes (are veela able to go to the higher steps or does their nature make them even more susceptible to the lower steps?).
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