(#) comatosejoyx 2011-05-29I only got to chapter 9 and couldn't read anymore, I feel it was boring and unoriginal. Author needs to take more care with sentence structure as it didn't flow properly at times. The switching of POV's so often and repetition of scenes gets irritating and, again, boring.
With a better storyline, the author could have real potential.
Author's responseOh, Okay. Thanks for the sugestion. Some like it, some don't. I'll do the best that I can. I'm only 14, still got lots of time for practice I guess(:
(#) xXDeathwishXx 2011-06-07I freakin love thiss!!!!
And Comatosejoyx you need glasses.
PLEASE update soon,Ive been waiting for like a week now. ):
Sorry,Im just a lil bit impatient. :p x
Author's responseHaha, Thank you(: I'll try update soon. It'll probably be up before this weekend, sorry for the wait:D
(#) theedgeofglory 2011-06-08I think this is amazing! Your a really good writer and the story is amazing. I wish this could keep going foreveeerrrrrr. :'D
The only reason I registered on this site was so I could tell you how good this is.
:] Keep up the amazing work.
Author's responseWow, you're so sweet. Thank you so so much! It means so much to me that you like it(:
Thank yoooooou! xx
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