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Saviour of the Broken
6 reviews**FRERARD**Gerard is returning home after 2 years with his abusive father, reuniting with his brother and mother. Then he meets Mikey's neighbourhood friend, Frank.. **FRERARD**Rated for language
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Saviour of the Broken
(#) geebabe100 2011-02-24
I LOve this soo much!! PLease please please... keep it up,, I really want to find out what happens next!! :DDAuthor's response
Thanks for reading!!!! I will be updating soon(: xxSaviour of the Broken
(#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-03-27
I really love this story, it's became one of my favourites :D
it is just getting better and better and your sooo good at writing :)
So keep up the good work
xx cozAuthor's response
Thank you so much, it means a lot!:D
xSaviour of the Broken
(#) comatosejoyx 2011-05-29
I only got to chapter 9 and couldn't read anymore, I feel it was boring and unoriginal. Author needs to take more care with sentence structure as it didn't flow properly at times. The switching of POV's so often and repetition of scenes gets irritating and, again, boring.
With a better storyline, the author could have real potential.Author's response
Oh, Okay. Thanks for the sugestion. Some like it, some don't. I'll do the best that I can. I'm only 14, still got lots of time for practice I guess(:Saviour of the Broken
(#) Thankyou4TheVenom 2011-06-01
I love this so freekin much.
You write really good,and it's one of the best I have ever read! (:
I hope it ends happily though D:Author's response
Thank you(:
It means so much, you've really picked me off the ground(:
We'll see ;3
xSaviour of the Broken
(#) xXDeathwishXx 2011-06-07
I freakin love thiss!!!!
And Comatosejoyx you need glasses.
e_o
PLEASE update soon,Ive been waiting for like a week now. ):
Sorry,Im just a lil bit impatient. :p xAuthor's response
Haha, Thank you(: I'll try update soon. It'll probably be up before this weekend, sorry for the wait:D
xSaviour of the Broken
(#) theedgeofglory 2011-06-08
I think this is amazing! Your a really good writer and the story is amazing. I wish this could keep going foreveeerrrrrr. :'D
The only reason I registered on this site was so I could tell you how good this is.
:] Keep up the amazing work.Author's response
Wow, you're so sweet. Thank you so so much! It means so much to me that you like it(:
Thank yoooooou! xx
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