Categories > Books > Harry Potter
Reviews
Harry Potter Payback Time
(#) jamaq 2011-03-05
This reads more like a detailed outline than an actual story. While it has potential, you need to flesh out your scenes a lot more than they are currently.Author's response
I am just now getting back into the swing of things I guess I need to go back and read them again but I will take your advice and begin to flesh out the character and the story itself thanks for the review
Sign up to review this story.