"Good girls did not become Companions." Inara/Mal.
"She could place her hand against a wall and feel Mal's heart beating in tune with the thrum of Serenity's engines"
"breathe," not "breath"
Great fic, very insightful. Nice work.
An nice piece, using an interesting writing technique, that shows well how complicated Mal and Inara really are. (Someone else already mentioned the breath vs. breathe but I stumbled over it too)
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