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The results on the scar are in. Arthur lays down the law.
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Inheritance and Fate
(#) OdinMage 2011-03-24
While this story isn't the best written, it certainly isn't horrible, and it's definitely a new take on a lot of things. My issues with it are more that parts keep getting cut off from the end of each chapter so chunks of the story are missing.
Is this posted elsewhere? Could you email a full copy to me if it isn't?
Keep writing!Author's response
I agree it isn't the best or well written at this point, but I dare anyone to say the same when it is completely edited (which won't happen until it is completely finished).
I have one back and added the parts which ficwad cut off. I am not sure if I am loading too much per chapter or it is just a fluke.
I am also posted at ff net. I came here and published this story because I keep getting error messages when I try to load new chapters or edit existing chapters. I didn't want to lose the thread of the story while waiting for ff net to get back to me. So far I have been waiting 8 days, I figured I had read more than my share of decent stories on ficwad and the audience may be different over here.
Feel free to continue reading and critiquing what I have posted. Thank you for your time and efforts in reading what my ideas.Inheritance and Fate
(#) Arden 2011-03-28
I have never gotten the hang of writing proper reviews. But I'm enjoying your story.
I also wanted to pop in and say it looks like someone has just been going through and down rating nearly every story on the front page, so don't take it personally.Author's response
I only write reviews when a story makes me feel something. Normally, I say 'way to go.' Some fics make me so angry, disgusted, or horrified that I comment. There is no right way to do it.
I think some people use fic writers as target practice. If we don't have the wherewithall to take a good thrashing, we probably will never become the writers we could have been.
Thanks for reaching out and letting me know. Most of my chapters were rated as original at first. Now some of them carry other labels that don't really match what I am trying to do or think I have done.
I ask any reader to write a review if the ficwad rating system doesn't match your feelings adequately so I have a reasonable idea of what you really think.
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