- Okay, let me tell you first, great story. I have no idea what the hell is going to happen next, and for the love of anything holy, because I have read this so far in one sitting if you take to long, I will go insane. I need to know what is going to happen next, I need to know Linsdey's secret before I punch a hole in my wall!
Okay now that I got that out of my system, no this story is anything but cliche, fucked up, yes but not cliche. I want to stab Frank's dad with a rusty pair of scissors!
- I seriously thought you were never going to update this story again. I'm glad I was wrong! I'd like to see more of this memory stuff, and hopefully it will help Frank really heal this time.
I was really shocked that he abandoned his wheelchair. What's going on?! Please update soon, because we love when you do. (^.^)-b
(#) paradoxicalcynic 2011-05-10Really awesome story!! :D
No - not cliche - definitely not! You can take something considered a cliche plot and turn it into something original which is what you've done! :)
And you don't just have one plot, there are underlying ones and it is very interrelated - fantastic job!!
(#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-05-28NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO that wasnt enough lol i want moreee i need more hehe
i think it was all so sweet i really do feel sorry for frankie but hopefully gerard will make him better hehe
keep up the awesome work i just love this story and i cant wait for more :p
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