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• With The Venomous Kiss You Gave Me, I'm Killing Lonliness

  (#) ShannonThePirate 2011-04-19

  Can't wait for more, this was realy cool, i was disappointed that i didn't get to be franks friend but still, it is cool... If there is a teacher called mr(s).Een i will laugh so hard... Hallow-Een! :L i'm terrible :L

• With The Venomous Kiss You Gave Me, I'm Killing Lonliness

  (#) jadesohma 2011-04-19

  I love it already:D I think Raven was a good pick for Frank's bestfriend. I just hope I'm picked for Mikey's girlfriend;) ANYWAY! I love you and your stories! RIGHT MORE!:)

• With The Venomous Kiss You Gave Me, I'm Killing Lonliness

  (#) xxKilljoysxx 2011-04-19

  :D Great story ! Cannot wait for more!! Please please update soon! I love your stories! :)
  I'm so happy that I was final three on being Frankie's friend(: Thank you so so much for considering me, it made me happy:D
  Raven was a good pick though. you're right, it works in with the story:)
  Looking forward to this story.. still hoping im picked for mikey's gf ;) Up to you of course
  
  Update soon please:)
  
  Rxx

• With The Venomous Kiss You Gave Me, I'm Killing Lonliness

  (#) Keep-it-Ugly 2011-04-19

  Please CARRY ON! WE'LL CARRY ON! (only if you do)

• With The Venomous Kiss You Gave Me, I'm Killing Lonliness

  (#) perfectzombie 2011-04-20

  this sounds like it's going to be awesome(: also i love the song you got the title from. hope you update soon :')

• With The Venomous Kiss You Gave Me, I'm Killing Lonliness

  (#) SmallHeightBigEgo 2011-04-20

  Hell yeah I like it (: You need to continue, and like, soon ^^

• With The Venomous Kiss You Gave Me, I'm Killing Lonliness

  (#) annabel-lee 2011-04-20

  I loved it! Very descriptive, and realistic character dialouge (I think I spelled that wrong). Update soon please!

• With The Venomous Kiss You Gave Me, I'm Killing Lonliness

  (#) paradoxicalcynic 2011-04-21

  Nice and original intro to the story and plot :)
  Might want to use a little less description. Found that sometimes there seemed to be too much - maybe it's just me :P Remember less is always more :)
  However, the majority of the story was pretty darn awesome!! You made use of characterisation, contrasting short and long sentences and description really well!!
  Look forward to the next chapter :D

• With The Venomous Kiss You Gave Me, I'm Killing Lonliness

  (#) rainbow_apocalypse 2011-04-21

  Awesome i loved it I think Raven was a good pick for Frank's bestfriend. I hope I'm picked for Mikey's girlfriend. but its still awesome please keep updataing :D

• With The Venomous Kiss You Gave Me, I'm Killing Lonliness

  (#) sineadlovesmcr 2011-04-29

  ooooooh update soon!you cant leave me hanging

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