There's a cry deep in the night, coming from the dungeons. Who is it? None other than Snape crying. But why? A letter here explains all. Please rr! [One-shot]
Story has great potential but is a little confusing. You need a beta reader to polish it to perfection so that the reader can see the story the same way you do.
Maybe this would get rated back up if you tweaked the exaggerated sap and OOC a little more. Then it would fall more clearly into the parody category. It's high, but it's not making it over the top, so I'm not laughing.
Thanks for the comment and suggestions!
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