- Awesome story. I love the mood you create, its very well done. And the way you portraid the characters. The way you describe everything (places, people, events, feelings) is exelent and I love the use of metaphores and similies, as well as the attention to detail. Keep it up! You are writing an awesome story. :)
Author's responsewhoa...thanks! :)
xx, a (aka fish soup. O_o)
(#) Death-wish 2011-12-04This is one of the best stories on here! Most of them are just getting right on to smut but yours has way more of a plot to it.
Author's responseAww...thanks...you have no idea just how nice it is to hear that! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
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