Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance
Call it a Harlequin romance, call it a stupid crush, call it doomed from the start, call it what you want. He called it summer.
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Bang The Doldrums
(#) SpiderDuck2 2011-05-26
This was fantastic! A little hard to follow at times, what with all the perspective changes. It seemed like you tried to keep Mikey and Pete as nameless as possible. I appreciate the overall effect it created, but it WAS a little confusing. Either way, once I got it figured out, it was phenomenal. It was emotional, and I could feel the angst, the heartbreak. Your metaphors were fantastic, if a little sweeping. Try pinning down what you want to say a little more cohesively, and you've got it exactly perfect! :DBang The Doldrums
(#) snake56tongue 2011-12-21
Bith, you made me cry .....
That was incredible!!! This is like the 19th time I've read it ...... It's like my drug, helping me get through life .....
You such an amazing writer ..... huggles :) :) :)
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