(#) Im-Not-Okay1 2011-06-02Oh.my.God! i loved this... although i think you should have gone into more detail about what mikey and gee did.
I had the same sort of idea once, But your writing is way better than mine.. ^.^ x
Lots of Hugs... Mitchie!
Author's responseGlad you liked it. I did have another version of this, where it went into more detail, but I deleted it `cause it was really dark and creepy. Plus, I wasn`t too sure `bout it `cause I don`t really write horror/gorey type stuff.
Glad you liked it anyway.
(#) mcr_killjoy 2011-06-07you should of done more to thisss! rather than just a one shot, still an amazing story thought! :D xx
Author's responseI did consider doing more to this and making it more scarey/gorey, but changed my mind. Glad you liked it anyway
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