- Congrats, that is probably the best rendition of the twins I have seen in ages. Most people seem to think that they finish each others sentences, when in reality they take a full sentence each and bounce off each other.
Nice going on not making Luna insane, merely eccentric.
Author's responseThanks! As you might imagine, I entirely agree with you about both the Twins and Luna... sometimes authors just go too far with them.
- Ooooh Nice story. I like your version of Luna, and can definitely see her acting like that as she entered Hogwarts.
Harry being at the Malfoy's has the potential to be very bad, but then, your preview shows that he survived.
Now if only people see Lockheart's attempts to gain fame using Harry as inappropriate advances...
Author's responseAs you'd imagine, I've heard that particular concern already...
Thanks for the review!
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