- friggin great :) wouldn't mind seeing more on the the whole animal and pheonix powers, also what's to stop the bad guys from getting other magic creatures done to them (other then hatred of muggles), have you thought about adding a dragon scale, that'd be neat.
Till next time :)
PS chapter ten polyjuice section gave me giggles, even reread it every now ad agian, hilarious! :)
- Nice chapter.
Really missing Tonks and Fleur, would be good to have a scene with them to show what they are up to.
The magic 8-ball part was funny, imagine what the twins would do with something like that.
The twins are in the seventh year not the sixth. They are two years ahead of the trio.
Idea for the Luck Potion, Harry was thinking in one of the past chapters that he would have to be lucky to get the Gryffindor chasers to help him fulfill his fantasies, what if while a little typsy on Gryffindor liquid courage he drank the wrong vile and got really lucky.
How about Harry suggesting to the twins a bad luck potion for pranking, since you wouldn't want it to be to strong it should be easier to make.
Who owns the Prophet anyway?
How can Sirius help out for hours when the Polyjuice is likely to wear off soon, I doubt Harry gave him alot of his hair.
For a moment I thought you were going to have harry polyjuice as Malfoy senior to go to the prophet, I was also wondering about the possiblity of having Sirius polyjuice as Malfoy Sr. and 'bribing' Fudge in a sting operation. maybe he could declare Sirius innocent.
- So, the counter-strike against Umbridge starts early in this AU. Will the DA still come into existance. Even if Umbridge is driven out, the underlying reason for the DA - the school is failing to teach the kids to defend themselves properly - still remains.
BTW - I like how you do Fred and George. You've got their balance between wacky humour and out-and-out genius just right. Never count the number of OWLs and NEWTs when deciding on intelligence; Einstein was a drop-out too. ;-)
Looking forward to more
BenRG's Rating: 8/10
(#) HeWhoComesWithTheDaw 2006-05-29Poor Sirius can't even get the bribing right. Sigh... Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work and update again soon.
I'd suggest not posting a chapter until you have it completed because once a new chapter is posted we don't get any more email alerts. So any changes you make are unknown unless someone is part of the CaerAzkaban group and can read you posts there.
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