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chapter 5 pt. 2
1 reviewppl ineed ur reviews! :( ifeel likk ido a bad job if idnt get any reviews! iwanna knw how my wonderful killjoys feel :) enjoy plz..
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Black n' Red
(#) LoveLustAndPixieDust 2011-10-20
I think your ideas are really good and that this has the potential to be a really good story, but one of the big things about writing is you have to get your spelling and grammar right really for it to be enjoyable for readers, I'm dyslexic so I know how hard spelling can be and no one is going to judge you for a few mistakes but things like capital letters are very simple and easy and they are important to include in your story, if you're having trouble with that type of stuff get a beta you can gaurentee if your grammar quality matches the content quality your views and reviews will go up!
Happy writing xxAuthor's response
aw thnkk u very much =o x3 itend to do that x) sowwie, ill try me best
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