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The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) BenRG 2006-06-02
Okay, this Adam guy is getting more and more annoying. He reminds me more than a little of Q in ST-TNG. Boy, I hope that he doesn't turn into a male Mary Sue, although his personality suggests against it.
Overall, this chapter strikes me as a bridge, maybe even an unnecessary one. Time will tell.
You managed to get the various Scoobies just right, I think, especially Xander and Anya.
I wonder: Will the cats turn out to be animagi?
BenRG's Rating: 6/10The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) paulblay 2009-06-26
Same as last chapter's review. There are many possible ways of avoiding this much explanatory text in one lump - including skipping forwards past it then referring to 'facts' learnt later when needed.
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