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Tarantula prt 3: heart-shaped box
19 reviewsMarkers, characters very loosely based off managers, and breath-taking embraces
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Where the animals should go...
(#) TheBambooMuncher 2011-07-09
EEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, i love this story so much! :A
yeah, i'dsuggest maybe a little more spacing, but otherwise it's great!!!! Hope you can update soon :D
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(#) fueledbyPanic 2011-07-10
Yeah, the spacing was better. Keep up the amazing work!
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(#) amos222 2011-07-10
Aw, Mikey, you spoilsport!! They were gonna kiss :[ And the poor abusive dad!! Can he turn good later on? That never happens in stories. Thanks for the chapter!Where the animals should go...
(#) Whovian-lily404 2011-07-11
This is good. i was sort of happy to see Frankies dad have a soft side. And it was to bad that Mikey had to interupt them. I would have liked to see... Read about Gee & Frank snogging! Haha
Sorry about your friend who moved away... I know how much that sucks. Just be sure that you stay in touch or in a few years, you.ll be kicking yourself
hehe, if more reviews get you to write quick, then here you go! i.m using my phone and it has a tendency to spam all the reviews i post, so this is your lucky day- if you dont minds having the same thing repeated 10 times or something lol
i think that the spaceing does make the page easier to read. and i hope that you have fun on your trip :]Where the animals should go...
(#) Whovian-lily404 2011-07-11
This is good. i was sort of happy to see Frankies dad have a soft side. And it was to bad that Mikey had to interupt them. I would have liked to see... Read about Gee & Frank snogging! Haha
Sorry about your friend who moved away... I know how much that sucks. Just be sure that you stay in touch or in a few years, you.ll be kicking yourself
hehe, if more reviews get you to write quick, then here you go! i.m using my phone and it has a tendency to spam all the reviews i post, so this is your lucky day- if you dont minds having the same thing repeated 10 times or something lol
i think that the spaceing does make the page easier to read. and i hope that you have fun on your trip :]Where the animals should go...
(#) Whovian-lily404 2011-07-11
This is good. i was sort of happy to see Frankies dad have a soft side. And it was to bad that Mikey had to interupt them. I would have liked to see... Read about Gee & Frank snogging! Haha
Sorry about your friend who moved away... I know how much that sucks. Just be sure that you stay in touch or in a few years, you.ll be kicking yourself
hehe, if more reviews get you to write quick, then here you go! i.m using my phone and it has a tendency to spam all the reviews i post, so this is your lucky day- if you dont minds having the same thing repeated 10 times or something lol
i think that the spaceing does make the page easier to read. and i hope that you have fun on your trip :]Where the animals should go...
(#) Whovian-lily404 2011-07-11
This is good. i was sort of happy to see Frankies dad have a soft side. And it was to bad that Mikey had to interupt them. I would have liked to see... Read about Gee & Frank snogging! Haha
Sorry about your friend who moved away... I know how much that sucks. Just be sure that you stay in touch or in a few years, you.ll be kicking yourself
hehe, if more reviews get you to write quick, then here you go! i.m using my phone and it has a tendency to spam all the reviews i post, so this is your lucky day- if you dont minds having the same thing repeated 10 times or something lol
i think that the spaceing does make the page easier to read. and i hope that you have fun on your trip :]Where the animals should go...
(#) Whovian-lily404 2011-07-11
This is good. i was sort of happy to see Frankies dad have a soft side. And it was to bad that Mikey had to interupt them. I would have liked to see... Read about Gee & Frank snogging! Haha
Sorry about your friend who moved away... I know how much that sucks. Just be sure that you stay in touch or in a few years, you.ll be kicking yourself
hehe, if more reviews get you to write quick, then here you go! i.m using my phone and it has a tendency to spam all the reviews i post, so this is your lucky day- if you dont minds having the same thing repeated 10 times or something lol
i think that the spaceing does make the page easier to read. and i hope that you have fun on your trip :]Where the animals should go...
(#) Whovian-lily404 2011-07-11
This is good. i was sort of happy to see Frankies dad have a soft side. And it was to bad that Mikey had to interupt them. I would have liked to see... Read about Gee & Frank snogging! Haha
Sorry about your friend who moved away... I know how much that sucks. Just be sure that you stay in touch or in a few years, you.ll be kicking yourself
hehe, if more reviews get you to write quick, then here you go! i.m using my phone and it has a tendency to spam all the reviews i post, so this is your lucky day- if you dont minds having the same thing repeated 10 times or something lol
i think that the spaceing does make the page easier to read. and i hope that you have fun on your trip :]Where the animals should go...
(#) Whovian-lily404 2011-07-11
This is good. i was sort of happy to see Frankies dad have a soft side. And it was to bad that Mikey had to interupt them. I would have liked to see... Read about Gee & Frank snogging! Haha
Sorry about your friend who moved away... I know how much that sucks. Just be sure that you stay in touch or in a few years, you.ll be kicking yourself
hehe, if more reviews get you to write quick, then here you go! i.m using my phone and it has a tendency to spam all the reviews i post, so this is your lucky day- if you dont minds having the same thing repeated 10 times or something lol
i think that the spaceing does make the page easier to read. and i hope that you have fun on your trip :]
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