Hikaru and Kaoru come up with a new twist on an old game. [Haruhi/Hitachiins]
Freakin' awesome. I was in love with the twins already, and you just stepped up my love. Level two...ha ha...is there going to be a level three?
This is my new guilty pleasure story. I like how you made it sexy, without demeaning your abilities by making it smutty. This was very well written. And if you're interested in writing more, please do...
There should be a sequel. It just SCREAMS for a second chapter!
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