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Wrong Boy Who Lived by Elisabeth Canden translated to english
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Revenge is so Sweet Chapter 1
(#) Damon8811 2011-07-13
Need to get a beta real bad...i understand it is a translation but that is why you need the beta, the grammar is improperRevenge is so Sweet Chapter 1
(#) paegan 2011-07-13
More like horribly disjointed. Grammar, syntax even spelling in some instances. Looks like an interesting story but I feel like I'm trying to decipher hieroglyphics while reading it...Revenge is so Sweet Chapter 1
(#) pizan 2011-07-14
Barely readable. Needs a beta and not google translate. Could be an interesting story, but needs major correcting. Also needs to learn the gender of pronouns.Revenge is so Sweet Chapter 1
(#) Rispah 2011-07-15
It seems like it would be a good story but you need to either go over it with a fine tooth comb and an english dictionary, or get a beta to proof read it for you.
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