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Beautiful lie
(#) MacheSalas 2011-07-18
this is going good but i didnt understand the beggining, she was crying and then happy or...?
and longer chapters will also be better, you know
besides those things everything is ok :)Author's response
No it was just cold.Thanks for the review!
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