(#) FireNinja7 2006-06-06Interesting. I liked how you described all the characters as what kind of book they were. I'd actually like to see what books all of the Naruto characters would be! ^_^
But I did think that I should mention that Kabuto is older then Itachi, not the other way around.
But anyway, good job!
- Eeeee! Well-written Itachi fic! That alone is enough to make me smile. I like how Itachi acknowledges that he cannot hide his emotions at all; it's an intriguing twist on a character who too often falls into the blandly evil villain stereotype. I like how you mention Itachi being fascinated with Kabuto and (to a lesser extent) describing the other people around him. And the fic won me over with the last line, because it really is all about the Itachi/Sasuke angst, and you reference it beautifully without being overwhelming.
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