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The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) wretchedmongrel 2006-08-10
So far I'm enjoying the story... However your accent for Fleur is more slavic than french. You may want to try comparing your Fleur dialogue to that of Krum and Fleur in Canon, I think you'll find your fleur sounds more Krum than Delacour. Otherwise again, great.The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-01-13
Very good chapter.
gunny
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