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• Mortification

  (#) Chii11 2006-06-04

  well yeah i dont think its posible to hide under a pebble(i know thats not the point) but other wise its pretty good

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  I know its was a simile, but, thank I tried! lol!

• Mortification

  (#) princessofoyownworld 2006-06-05

  Another very good pome

• Mortification

  (#) fruit_addict 2006-08-24

  Lol! I know the feeling.

• Mortification

  (#) fruit_addict 2007-05-23

  haha I disagree. it was not a simile it was a metaphor!

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