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Reckless & Relentless
(#) japulapu 2011-08-05
I know it's very hard to write dialouge. But as a reader, dialouge is fresh and easier to read after a paragraph of description. Dialouge is hard no to make awkward. Very often it sounds forced or unnatural. But you are doing a good job of it.Author's response
Again, thank you. I'm trying to get past the dialogue barrier that I have and I found the dialogue in this chapter was easier to write than normal.Reckless & Relentless
(#) midnightblackparade 2011-08-07
Really good keep it up :)Author's response
Thank you! I'll try to update soon but I'm having some trouble with chapter 3 so I'm just giving it a couple of days to think about it :]
Thank you again, it means a lot.
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