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One Wizard Too Many
(#) Wolfric 2011-09-02
You'd think he would pick up his toys. Wouldn't want somebody else to get a hold of it. The 'puff take down was fun. Good chapter. Thanks for writing. W.One Wizard Too Many
(#) ILikeToRead 2011-09-02
Great chapter and I really do love Harry's attitude. The RPG was very effective and I wonder if he gets to claim the leftovers? Thanks for sharing!One Wizard Too Many
(#) DrT 2011-09-02
Interesting take on Cedric; and nice to see a nasty wanker of a puff besides Zach (he can't be the only one!)One Wizard Too Many
(#) Cateagle 2011-09-03
::snicker:: I reckon that's one idiot "Puff" who may learn better manners for the future (though, given what we've seen of the wizarding world, I doubt it). I do hope Harry reclaimed the rest of those rounds, these ignorant wizards would create all sorts of mayhem since they don't understand them; on the other hand, they may just have a bit more respect for non-magical weaponry now.
This is quite the fun story and I'm waiting to see how the wizarding world reacts to such non-magical means of competing. Speaking of muggle weaponry, a dragon is the only "game" I can think of where a Barrett might be too little gun for the target.One Wizard Too Many
(#) Vanir 2011-09-04
Lovely story. I love the attitude, love the banter and i do love how he goes into action when he can get away with it. The notion of purebloods obliviating themselves from painful lessons was a stroke of genius. It explains so much. The fighting scenes are vivid and nicely dirty. The whole matter-of-fact style is slightly intoxicating. I can just see how Hermione will take their relationship further. "Harry, if you don't horribly hurt someone in there, I'll let you touch my butt."
All in all, nicely done.One Wizard Too Many
(#) oldsarge 2011-09-04
Very fun story. I love your wacky sense of humor here. I never thought of the obliviation painful memories before. Sure wish I could figure out how to do that myself. Anyway, please continue on with this. I'm enjoying it thoroughly.
One Wizard Too Many
(#) Hytekrednek 2011-09-07
Oh the horror, hehehe. That has to be the first time I have ever read a story for HP and he used a rocket launcher for the dragon. Very well done. Looking forward to the rest as usual.
James
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