- Nicely done & well executed. I've become quite a fan of fics which turn Dumbledore's manipulations back on him, and this was a new way of doing it. An entertaining read... now all you have to do is wrap this into a longer fic that tells the beginning, a lot more middle, and of course the end of this story. :)
- ::snicker:: I quite enjoyed seeing Albus' machinations being turned back on him (dating Hermione has quite clearly been very, very good for Harry in many ways). I'd love to see how they approach the Third Task as well as the backstory as to how they got this far (definitely the potential for a major story or series of stories). One of the real benefits of this relationship is that Ron clearly wouldn't be in a position to interfere and it would be rather for difficult for Ginny and/or molly to play games with potions (as seems hihgly probable from canon).
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