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Never Coming Home
(#) jesusweekes 2011-10-02
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Favourite chapter so far. The extent to which you stress their lust, their /need/for each other is amazing. And I'm excited for more now, are they gonna get caught, whatever happened to Ray, what will the repercussions be etc
Also "Jamia. A calm, still and secure pond, she'd been pushed into the back of his mind by the raging river that was Gerard's existence" I loved that comparison, it perfectly captured how Frank seems to feel his relationship with Jamia is mundane and even boring compared to how much he needs Gerard.
Can't wait for more. xoNever Coming Home
(#) PandaFrankie 2011-10-04
"Maybe we're just brave, little one."
I love that! It's almost like an invitation to happiness, the tattered rags of their previously broken relationship already weaving itself back together in front of your eyes.
Brilliant :)
-C xoNever Coming Home
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-10-21
Yes! He's finally getting better! Thank you so much for making that happen. Fantastic chapter :)
SF
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