Categories > Books > Harry Potter > The Rise and Fall of an Empire
The war between Light and Dark has raged for years, and every day territory is lost to the Dark Lord. Then a string of events turns the world on its ear most violently...
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The Rise and Fall of an Empire
(#) Dark_Mage 2006-06-10
Ok I found this exciting, however are you always going to write in this style of writing, it is usually used in Prologues or epilogues, seen as this is the second chapter you should have really stopped writing like this by now, suggest combining these two chapters together and then posting the next chapter in the sense that it feels like we are living it, like most stories.The Rise and Fall of an Empire
(#) Shaggy37 2006-06-13
very nice chapter but the format is a little confusingThe Rise and Fall of an Empire
(#) lordblack 2008-01-04
I love this story so much, as one who reads Clancy I have to say that you're doing an excellent job! Bravo!! when I read what type of story this was I allmost wet myself.
Please continue!!!!!!
I love it.
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