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- I was hoping for a longer dialogue, seeing as how Molly is always fun for her observations in the comics, but for a short piece, it's okay. I think you managed to capture the characters pretty well.
A little grammar editing could be done for this, though. Speaking of which: it should be "You're welcome."
(#) RileyCathleenKeyes 2007-06-20OMG...That was so awesome!!!! I love it...It's so AWESOME...I don't know what to say...it's just to cool!!! It was funny, sweet, well written, what ever you want it got it! Anyways, KEEP IT UP! You're an awesome author and I LOVE your work! I can't believe how such a simple plot can be so awesome! I'm impressed...you're one of the few people who can make a simple plot like this one so interesting!!! Anyways, keep it up, this is AWESOME!!!! You're a GREAT author!
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