(#) Amethystasheryn 2009-06-06LOL, this was funny! I especially enjoyed the comment about Arthur being English and liking to talk about the weather ... And Arthur's yell when the wolf jumped at him. I spent several minutes discussing with the other people in the room how you'd actually pronounce it. :)
There was at least one spelling error that stood out (you said "each today" instead of "each day") and if there are more, they didn't leap out at me.
Thanks for writing,
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