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First of the Gang to Die
(#) MyChemFreak 2011-10-26
Holy shit, they raped innocent little Lucianna...
Sick bastards:| fan fiction or not, it's terrible:( but I love Lornaigh's writing; it's really brilliant:3First of the Gang to Die
(#) AdnarimSmada 2011-10-26
Christ, that was probably one of the most disgusting things I've ever read.
Really? She is a child. No one deserves to be raped but fuck, it's so much worse to do that to a child.
That sick bastard got what he deserved, not enough though.
-Adnarim SmadaFirst of the Gang to Die
(#) Bitch-Bot 2011-10-27
fuck
lucianna was raped? ive never liked warner, even irl i dont like maralyn manson. but then this made me cry and then the end is like a fuse towards an explosion! i knew gee would snap at some point
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(#) Emorockergoth 2011-10-28
I cant believe that he raped poor little luci what a sick fuck.
God that torture sounded like the worst thing that could happen to someone but thats probs cause I just hate rats the things scare the crap out of me :(
Poor Luci I mean this has absolutley destroyed her frankie and Gerard.
Cant wait for the next bit XDFirst of the Gang to Die
(#) MCRkilljoy 2011-10-30
i read this during school a few days ago but i couldmnt comment,
THEY RAPED A CHILD, A YOUNG GIRL THATS JUST SICK, AND THEN THEY SAY THEY ENJOIED IT,
and gerard quit, he quit, YOU MADE HIM QUIT. WHY??!
awell ur story, u do what u want but pleae update soon, as in really really really really soon
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(#) MCR_punk 2011-10-31
WOW. JUST WOW. That is sick, just sick. The thing Warner did, the gore and stuff was fine, but wow. I don't even know what to say. Awesome writing, just amazing.First of the Gang to Die
(#) striketoincinerate 2011-11-01
this story is absolutely amazing, i don't tend to cry at these kind of things but dammit this has managed to! Poor Luci, and I can't wait for the next update! xo
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