(#) tortillachip 2011-11-14I really like this. I think it's really good, and it's definitely not boring like some stories without dialogue could be. I like how Mikey seems like," I'm not a zombie, I'm not a human, but I must accept what I am whether it's a blessing or a curse." That sort of theme, I guess, kinda reminds me of a poem called " I Am What I Am. So What?" by Raquel Valle-Sentíes. I really like those kinds of themes when they're done right, and you did it wonderfully. I like this a lot also because I don't see a lot of stories that don't use much dialogue. You know you're a great writer when you do something that's not done so often, and you do it very well. I also like the description of the people he knew and how they probably mean a little more than they did before because they're not there for him to see and hear everyday. I also like the little Frikey. Good job.
Author's responseThank you very much! I am soooo glad that you liked it! I couldn't help but splash a little bit of Frikey in there because it's my favourite pairing. Thanks for telling me that it's not boring; I've never done anything without dialogue before and I was terrified that it would be as dull as ditch water. Thank you sooo much for reviewing! :)
(#) CatscanFlyy 2011-12-19Oh this had my steaming up! Why are you such an amazing person? I just want to put you in a box with a typwriter so I can read your work forever. This was so sad but so beautiful! It was in no way dull just completely heart breaking especialy Gerard not being able to save him! I love this so much!
Author's responseThank you VERY much; I'm so soooo pleased that you liked it! Reading your review has put a genuine happy smile on my face; thank you! :)
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