(#) frisbee_Chicken 2011-11-15i've never seen the eye but it looks really cool! this was so cute and frank is awesome i just wanna...GAHHH....yeh i'm horny and weird oh well and for some reason i really like your ray even tho he said like two lines but whatevs, okay, whatevs. Seriously.
So yeah. update.
- I am LIKING this. I could say love, but I'm not at that satge yet. I would've probably liked it better if his eyes were originally hazel and then he got blue ones, but I'm just an ass like that. Very nice writing structure, not over-descriptive, not too vague. I always have a problem with being too descript. You go, girl!
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