(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2011-11-25I really, really like this. I've never read anything quite like it and it's really left me thinking. The way you ended it, especially the last line, was pure magic. Well done on such a great piece! :)
Author's responseAsdfghjkl thank you so much! Here, have a mental castle made of cookies.
(#) CO_toxicMelody 2011-12-26beautiful depressing girly. it seems like a punch in the gut. just plain amazing! it feels like i can relate to it. in my own mental way. i feel like hiding from nothing too, all the time. i just run off to some secluded place and just dont think. and slow my heart beat. and lay down.
love you!!!! Xxx
Author's responseAww, thank you Xan! I love you too!
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