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Finding Jared
(#) Eileen_02 2012-08-21
Your story is amazing! The plot is great. You had an idea for it and you presented it well. There are many dialogues. A tip for the future : I think you should describe the athosphere more. It'd make it more mysterious ;) Okay, so now I'll continue reading ;]
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