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• Fate's Cruel if Life's Great

  (#) KobraBlaze 2011-11-27

  Yay! This chapter was super. It really was. I can't wait to see how Mikey reacts when he is fully awake. Oooh. It's so exciting. Update soon

  Author's response

  Thank you; I'm very glad that you liked it! I'm pleased that you think it's exciting, I was worrie that it might come across as dragged out and/or boring. Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)

• Fate's Cruel if Life's Great

  (#) SyraStrange 2011-11-27

  SWEET JACKASSES EATING SUSHI UNDER SEX! That was so vivid. I could literally see it. And in real time that was probably nine or ten minutes. Damn; you got some writing skillz. (That beginning part of my review, that was my odd way of sayIng 'SWEET JESUS!' in case you didnt know...) Please update soon!

  Author's response

  Thank you very much! I'm loving your way of saying "SWEET JESUS", it made me smile! I'm pleased that you liked it! I'll update tonight (UK time). Thank you for taking the time to review! :)

• Fate's Cruel if Life's Great

  (#) tortillachip 2011-11-28

  This is great! I know I say this every time, but I really like this. Your writing is so descriptive and it really allows the reader to create a picture. I like how once Mikey screams it's almost as if Frank forgets about the kiss and all that is on his mind is helping Mikey. I also really like this line. " My idea of suffering before meeting Mikey Way was delightfully pleasant compared to what it is now." It really shows how much it means to have this adorable stuttering kid that doesn't deserve what was given to him. It kinda makes me think Frank is feeling bad or something because he sees what Mikey has gone through and compares it to what happened in his own life, and Frank's suffering, in his opinion, just isn't as bad as Mikey's. I like how Frank understands that some things are just supposed to be sorted out through family, but finally decides that it's okay to go and help. Also, in the part where Gerard is trying to shake Mikey awake, he's yelling at Gerard to stop, and it's almost as if he thinks Mikey's going to get hurt again, and he can't live through that again. It's like he's horrified of seeing Mikey hurt or upset or anything like that. This is so well written, and I really love the way that this was written out. I always look forward to reading your writing.

  Author's response

  Thank you very much!
  I'm glad that you liked it and got it; I was kinda worried that it didn't make much sense/was boring/was confusing because of how Frank wanted to let Gerard sort it, but your review has really reassured me!
  Thank you soooo much for taking the time to do such a detailed, lovely review - I always enjoy reading your reviews, they help me write. Thanks again! :)

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