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He had taken something pure inside of her and broken it in to pieces.
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Give My Heart Back
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-12-03
It was short but that was all it needed. This was perfect, the best chapter so far I think because it expressed everything perfectly. I forgive Frank now but I'm still pissed off with him!!
Update.
SFAuthor's response
Aw, thank you! I'm really glad you think so. Yeah... I'm hoping that I can write his character well enough to express his complete sorrow towards what he's done while still expressing Hayley's feelings correctly.
I'll try to soon. (:Give My Heart Back
(#) Bad_Romance 2011-12-03
Completely agree with the above review. It was so sad though cos all emotions were out there. And Hayley talking to frank was heartbreaking.
Really can't wait for the next part.Author's response
Thank you! (:
I'm gonna try to work on it a little tonight so hopefully I'll have it posted soon.Give My Heart Back
(#) MsMalMal 2011-12-03
this is really one of my fav fanfictions, so UBER THANK YOU :D
but i loved this chapter even though it was short, so i totally agree with the above reviews.
please update :DAuthor's response
Aw, really? Wow. Thank you so much! (:
I'll definitely try to soon!Give My Heart Back
(#) GAClive 2011-12-08
This story is so heart wrenching. Good job with it. Can't wait for more.Author's response
Aw, thank you so much!Give My Heart Back
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2012-02-08
It's funny, because whenever I see the name Hayley I think of the Hayley from Paramore.Author's response
Same here most of the time. But Hayley is one of my favorite names ever so I couldn't help but use it. Plus Hayley is hot and severely talented so thinking of her when reading the name isn't too awful. =)
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