(#) CatscanFlyy 2011-12-20This was perfect! I loved how everthing was directed towards Frank and also that even though Gerard was crazy he was still easy to relate to and all the different uses of sick to move the story forward was awesome, really simple but clever. I'm becoming your biggest fan here!
Author's responseThank you very much; I'm soooooo pleased that you liked this!
I used the word 'sick' throughout because, in a moment of unadulterated boredom, I made myself a prompt table and 'sick' came up; thus birthing this twisted little one-shot.
Thank you for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)
(#) SyraStrange 2011-12-20I would argue with CatscanFlyy but I don't think I would win.... Gerard, Frank, and Mikey always have some triangle.... Hm. This is really well written. :D You're such a great writer.
Author's responseThank you very much; it's really uplifting to know that you like my writing! :)
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-20This isn't boring at all, and it really makes a lot of sense. I read a really weird story where Gerard was abusing Mikey, and it was so ridiculous and outrageous that it was kinda good, if that makes any sense. I kinda liked it, but I kinda didn't. It sounds terrible, I know, but I was curious about it. Anyway, I think this was better written than that story I read, and more realistic. I probably shouldn't be comparing them, but I am and I think this is far better. I really liked how it started as a Frerard. Everybody makes Gerard steal Frank from Mikey in one shots, and I liked how you switched it up a bit. I also liked that at the end it seems like Gerard is more worried about Frank not wanting to talk yo him. Sure, he loved his brother, but the whole ending was about Frank. I really liked that because it showed very clearly just how much he really cares for him, which must be hard to show in a one shot. I also liked how the word sick came into play. First it's said as a joke, then it's said out of anger, and then it's said out of disgust. When Frank called him sick in the beginning he said it as a joke, not the way some people said it before. At the end, though, he meant it quite unjokingly, maybe even said it the way other people would have said it to you, only with more disgust in his voice. Great job, I loved this.
Author's responseThank you sooo much; I'm relieved that you didn't think that this is boring.
The word 'sick' was used in this a lot because it was like my focus word thing for this one-shot. I've never written from a focus word/prompt table so it's a real relief to know that you think that this went alright!
Thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such a complimentary and detailed review; it really does help! :)
(#) KobraBlaze 2011-12-20This isn't crap at all. It is quite the opposite. It's awesome! I really like this one shot. I'm not exactly a big fan of frerard (I just prefer Frikey but I still enjoy some frerard stories) but this really good and original I think!
Author's responseThank you very much; it's very kind of you to say such nice things about the crap I write!
I'm more of a Frikey person, but I thought that this worked better as a Frerard (sort of).
Thank you sooo much for taking the time to leave such a nice review; you've made me smile! :)
(#) snake56tongue 2012-01-08Bitch! You made my heart hurt!
And what is this strange substance falling from my eyes?!
Seriously doll, this is fantastic :)
I never feel sorry for Gerard, cause he always seems to be the one doing the hurting rather than getting hurt, but I was like "Poor Gerard!!"
I love how this is written too :) You truly are amazing :)
Another favourite of yours on my list :)
Author's responseSorry about the negative side-effects of reading this. ;P
Thank you very much, I'm soooo sooooooooo pleased that you think this is alright!
With this I wanted Gerard to be kinda insane, but I wanted people to feel sorry for him too, so I'm glad that it made you feel sorry for him.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)
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