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A suprizing letter
1 reviewHarry recieves a letter. And confronts a person at hogwarts about it.
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Harry potter assassin style
(#) Loki-L 2005-05-26
Are you trying to write in some wired poetry style or is your formating and your repetitive sentence structure an accident? Why don't you capitalize names? Have you considered using a spellchecker to make your work appear more professional?
The general idea of Harry being a retired preteen assasin does not make very much sense to me but it might be salvagable with some work.
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