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Chapter 1: Dysfunctional.
9 reviewsIt wasn't like I begged you to, to do the things you want to do.
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Inconceivable. (Frerard)
(#) DisenchantedEnding 2012-01-03
Okie, heh. This is AMAZING. It's so real and vivid and lifelike, and you can really feel the tension between Frank and his Mother! It felt so.. dysfunctional and like she was prodding at a lost cause. I loved how solitary Frank's attitude was when he wasn't being beat up.
Speaking of which, poor him! I really feel for him, and that Demetrius is a nasty piece of work. :(
Great job! Oh, and welcome to Ficwad. :)Inconceivable. (Frerard)
(#) PrisonerBeDamned 2012-01-03
I'm just going to agree with the review above because this is so good that I'm lost for words aheh.
*adds to alerts and hums casually*Inconceivable. (Frerard)
(#) JammyDodger 2012-01-03
That was truly amazing. I didn't know how to feel when I first read the description, but I thought I'd give it a go and WOW glad I did. Really, this is so detailed and I could envision everything so clearly. You're a seriously talented writer. Keep it up.
Welcome to Ficwad!Inconceivable. (Frerard)
(#) SwordFishesBite 2012-01-03
Eh.. wow?!
I would rate if I could but I have no rating points I'm afraid. :(Inconceivable. (Frerard)
(#) aweirdtree 2012-01-03
yay, i liked this! (: you write well and this story sounds interesting, thanks for that. am absolutely going to add this to my favourites(:
and, as a few people have already said, welcome to FicWad, LovesWistfulDreams!Inconceivable. (Frerard)
(#) methanemandie 2012-01-03
really good so far :D very original, can't wait for more :)Inconceivable. (Frerard)
(#) MCR_punk 2012-01-03
Love it! You are a great writer and this story is really interesting. Welcome to Ficwad! :DInconceivable. (Frerard)
(#) monstrice901 2012-01-04
unusual
So far very good, and can't wait for the next update. Make Gerard as big an arsehole as possible..... pleeeeaaaase!
Very well, written - you really are a talented writer! And I dunno, you just set the scene really well, and it's great!
Update ASAP
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(#) KilljoyLlamaLove 2012-05-23
Please please please write more please holy crap. And please make Gerard and frank get together and vuyisvrfguyogwefuoyvherouygfoyub please. This stuff is my life.
I've been struggling to find some good stories and I found this, it's so good! Please write more.
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