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Phaelan comes in for a rough landing and meet's Hogwarts face on in her interview
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The Part of me that is Missing
(#) Shaggy37 2006-06-22
awesome chapter, I so can't wait for the 4th chapter to come out, you can't just stop the story just because you don't think its worth it because its worth it, I've been reading it off and on on www.fanfiction.com so do keep up the story and update soon please:):):):)The Part of me that is Missing
(#) lantana 2006-06-22
I can't believe this is your first story, it has none of the usual firsties failures: no runaway sentences, a consistent plot. Please do continue writing, it's well worth it!The Part of me that is Missing
(#) AberforthsAvatar 2006-10-28
I am hooked. I began to read out of curiosity, but your tale is compelling in its own right. I find your protagonist a bit much to accept, with all that scholarship and military experience packed into so young a life (and a LtCdr rating after at best 5 years post-Academy service is even harder to credit), but am willing to meet you half-way on that.
I look forward to seeing where you are going with this. Thanks for sharing the story with us.Author's response
Thank you. Hmm, I thought I had edited the story to make her a lieutenant only - I must have missed some references - She's not merely just a muggle, which will come out later.
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