This story has lots of wonderful aspects: you give us great characterization, a nice turn of phrase, and lots of plot twists. I love the view of Harry, "Edward," and especially Draco. You portray them with depth and colour. Thanks for avoiding the stereotypes.
I'm looking forward to more.
Author's responseThank you for the comment. Edward was hard to write for obvious reasons. However, Harry was a lot harder than I thought he was going to be. I wanted to present a "Thinking" Harry instead of just a "Reaction" Harry that we usually get in canon. He is jaded and disappointed in the way things have been going yet is realistic enough to know that he can't just go independent due to various reasons including the lack of the resources. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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